Thursday, 7 June 2018

Informal etalments

Today I woke up at 5 am wet in my bed, very cold as the wind came through my shack made with dirty corrugated iron. I thought I was going to get sick. So I got up and dressed myself with my very torn and ragged clothes. I went to my Neighbors bathroom because we don’t have one. After that my mom and Dad called me and said we don’t have food. And I looked on the counter if there was food but there wasn’t and i started to feel worried.

 So I went on my way to school just walking and there was only one lamp post shining. So it was very dark and I was still hearing owl noises and whistling noises from the wind. As I got to school it was very muddy and I just saw some kids playing soccer and they were all wet and cold. Our teacher called us in side but it started to rain heavily and it started to flood when we were in the classroom and we thought we were saved but the roof started to leak. So We had to run home. As I rushed inside my shack I saw my parents stuck in a room. So I broke in open an we run outside and stood on a tall house next to us. I was lucky it was made from bricks otherwise it would have collapsed.

Where I live is not a nice place at all, I really hope my Town becomes a better place because I really don’t like it. I am concerned that my parents don’t have a job because our house and all the things in it are full of dirty mud and are broken. The flood drained into the river next to us, finally but it was very stinky because the sewage water was everywhere. I started waking to the shops to beg for food but I felt something sore on my foot and I looked down at my foot and the litter I was walking on cut me on my foot. I limped home on one foot but then suddenly it started to sting and I just realised it got infected by the sewage waste. I finally got home and I asked my mom to take me to the doctor to try help me. And she said “ok” so she carried me there but the line was so long they told us to go home.

3 comments:

  1. Well done
    Really nice blog post it’s really long though
    Jared

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  2. To Tristan
    It was a sad story,Loved it
    From dariuz

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